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Carol Young's avatar

What a rich and moving story. Thank you, Jenny.

Melissa Kuipers's avatar

Thank you for this poetic, full and vivid story. I love the way your imagery explores the limits of communication and the distances that grow within families.

Patty C.'s avatar

Dear Jenny, your retelling of this intense experience was beautiful and heart wrenching. It flows with such gorgeous language about both wonderful and horrible experiences; thank you for taking the time and putting in the effort it takes to create such a moving piece. This makes my memory of you on the zoom screen in our workshop a year ago more vivid than ever.

Rebecca Weller's avatar

Woah jenny…. beautiful. “I watched the red lake fade and stream and waited for her reassurance—but she was unable to give me that. Her thoughts displaced…She did not want to be found. She was not ready for me to find her.”