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McKenzie Watson-Fore's avatar

This ending is so perfect. Pedaling off to go find a benevolent dentist in the sky 🚲

XXLdutch's avatar

Love it!

Jennifer Hurst's avatar

I identify with so many things, specific and aural. And I remain grateful for my religious relatives who did loving things for us after my mother married a non-Amish man. We try so hard for rightness and righteousness. And I wished for dentists too. This piece is spot on for describing the anxiety-inducing innocence we strivers experience and intensify to show G-d how good we are. I thank our society for public school.

Great article. Thanks.

Geraldine Creed's avatar

Such a great story, Kevinlina. .....to glossolalize ...logorrhea, the gibberish of an Alzheimer’s patient...love it. I didn't want this to finish. :)

Kevilina Burbank's avatar

Aw, thanks, Geraldine!