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BRinMilwaukee's avatar

Great story. You're a better man than I, Gunga Din.

Dorian Burden's avatar

Great piece. Wonderfully captures those days in our lives when we don't bother to read the sign posts but survive anyway. I will check out the mysteries!

William Bartlett's avatar

Enthralling and expertly told. I was dreading the disaster to come and SO relieved when you all escaped it.

Jennifer Hurst's avatar

Cocky young men, the winners and the Darwin Award “winners”. Great story. And, yippee, now I have a new mystery series to savor. Thanks.